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for a beings lips to leak false accusations  creating a negative feel in one's personal lifestyle or space// believing that every lie from your mouth is true// you feed off of others doubt and low self esteem to grant you energy and highness// luring them in with kindness then suddenly releasing their secrets to cause them to plunge into an eternity of self hatred and depression// letting them meet their lower self which tricks them into thinking that they are the best self they can be// why kill their happiness// why kill their hopes and aspirations// why kill to put yourself on a pedestal that will surely crumble once death occurs// no you will not prevail// no you will not persist// no you will not swipe the innocence from a being and make it your own// you will face defeat// you will cause your downfall// you will meet your maker never to see the pearly white gates but to fall into the fiery depths that will burn you to a crisp// Look into the eyes of kindness while it forces you to kneel at its feet// grant it your attention//

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Date: 6/16/2016 11:26:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lauryn. :)
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Date: 6/15/2016 9:11:00 PM
Pouring out may help psychologically ...balancing the composition with poetical features makes such poems objective and more readable ... a good poem nonetheless ...
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Date: 6/15/2016 8:19:00 AM
Lauryn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/15/2016 2:20:00 AM
Lauryn, was to read you are hurting. Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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