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Below is the poem entitled ASSAD which was written by poet John Loving III. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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and he watches death
like it's a video game
his end is the same

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  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:47:00 AM
    I do not wish death on anyone, but some people do improve the world by leaving it.

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 8:47:00 AM
    true, and for that we're all grateful!

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:02:00 PM
    very interesting one, john! Let me go find another. I just love haiku.

    Date: 4/22/2012 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I get it.
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 2:08:00 PM
    His days are numbered..think he`s the only one who still doesn`t get it..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one John..Glad that you got the spelling corrected on video..Thanks for stopping by..I enjoyed writing that Haiku about the Jets and the Pelicans..I am glad that you got something special from reading it..Have a great eve...Sara

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for the comment. Happy EASTER to you and your family. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 11:48:00 AM
    Not good with these modern haiku's but I like this hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Hi John, this is an excellent modern haiku. The only thing is that video is spelled with an e. Hugs, Catie :)