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Below is the poem entitled Ashes which was written by poet Caitlin Dwinnell. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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And as the smoke rose

There was no going back

And as the smoke rose

The ashes turned black

And as the smoke rose

The trees burned as well

And Standing before me was Satin and hell

As the smoke rose

There was no going back

So I lie in the ashes

Cold ashes of black

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Caitlin well get up you need to write more stunning lines like these....David