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Ash

ASH you poke and stare a wildfire glare in melting shrieks I turn and burn away till all that’s left is ash © Kim van Breda—22 October 2015

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Date: 10/26/2015 5:03:00 PM
Very intelligent poem, nice one....Really enjoyed reading it... Hugs :D
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:30:00 AM
Very effective considering you used so few words.
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