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As The Water Sleeps

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As The Water Sleeps

As the water sleeps
Amidst heavy silent rocks -
A rare twilight creeps

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 6:57:00 AM
    thanks for everybody that read it. it makes my heart leap up ^_^

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 11:10:00 AM
    Congratulations Jan, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 9:55:00 AM
    Hello Jan Camille, Congratulations on your win in the contest. well done my dear poet As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 4:34:00 PM
    Hey Jan! Great job, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems tenth place honored win! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 4:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 1:18:00 PM
    Congrats on a well deserved win, Jan. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 12:21:00 PM
    Wow!Wonderful!Congrats on your win Jan----kashinth

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 8:44:00 AM
    Cool how you put in some rhyme in here too, like that "rare twilight" too :) Congrats on your win, Jan :) - nikko :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 7:48:00 AM
    Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write ... enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..this happy Sunday...

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 11:40:00 PM
    I think this one is just beautiful, jan. Congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 10:16:00 PM
    Very pretty Jan. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 9:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 10th Place Win in my contest, Jan. And thank you very much for your support. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:34:00 PM
    excellent. I love how you did it!

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 9:37:00 PM
    enjoyed the read here Jan.