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As If They Had Souls

The rocks rose above 
The salty steam of their death
As if they had souls.

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  1. Date: 4/27/2014 4:16:00 PM
    beautiful beginning Haiku and end, Mike. My compliments.

  1. Date: 4/27/2014 2:24:00 AM
    Mike... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 2:54:00 AM
    Excellent take- Congrats Mike

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 10:18:00 AM
    Interesting Haiku...Keep the creative pen flowing. If for Raul's contest good luck..It is a winner...Sara

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 2:23:00 PM
    wow i like this i dont know if you won or not but you should have this is a unique way of describing the ghost tides and i thought it was wonderful! Jo

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 9:45:00 PM
    Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners already. I guess I missed this one Congratulations, Mike, Good one!

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 4:57:00 PM
    Congratulations and kudos! Mike, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 10:10:00 AM
    Hey Mike, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 3:39:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Mike. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 6:19:00 PM
    Great job here, Mike. Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 5:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 4:47:00 PM
    Congrats Mike on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory for an amazing write.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 2:35:00 PM
    Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Karen

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 1:35:00 PM
    Mike, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 10:39:00 AM
    Deep and liked this Haiku, strong feeling portrayed, thanks for your support Daniel

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 3:15:00 PM
    very vivid poem, enjoyed

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 2:16:00 PM
    mysterious paradox

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 1:46:00 PM
    Very thought provoking! Light & Love