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As I buggied about

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As I buggied about

Needed help walking
Was in a superstore
Sister spotted a buggie
I looked and said. Noooooo

But she insisted 
Because of the pain
Well, i did, guess what
Will never do so again

Just a front and reverse
Oh i forgot, plus a horn
She wrote out a big L
Wishing i hadn't been born

So started  it up
Just missed some shopping
Left on the floor
Silly sod i said muttering

Was going great guns
Had many a smile
From the old dears
Pity showing a mile

Some started to chat
I laughed at their clout
Had many a life story
As i buggied about

Would i do it again
No blinking way
Put up with  the pain
On my feet I will stay.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Well this as just got to be one of the best visual poems i've read in ages,, good one Seren,,, love this...

    Date: 5/26/2013 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Harry, lovely to see you, missed you. Lol it was an experience....Seren
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:20:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is quite the humorous little write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and funny poem this evening! You have inspired many with your poetry and I believe those that are looking for a hilarious write to be influenced by, this one would be a great one to do just that! What a terrific piece Seren, Fabulous Work!!

    Date: 5/25/2013 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Russell its funny now, guess it was funny the time really. But never again... Seren