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As Happy As Sharks In Hell

A long journey, hot and sweaty With thorns along the jetty Pricking my body dangerously I sat and pondered glumly Hell is surely filled with demons Ready to give me lots of sermons And reducing my dose of that love song So that I drown, drowsy, all day long! Miracle! Heaven and Hell so alike No demons, hurling out, apelike! Just an empty island, surrounded by sharks They rode calmly as if in parks Friendly and warm, they even wave For sweets even if I do crave I satisfied myself with that sweet wine Intoxicated by those sharks in my confine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:25:00 PM
Anoucheka congrats on your win, love it...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:52:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win Anoucheka
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Date: 8/4/2012 8:35:00 PM
ANOUCHEKA :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD
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Date: 7/23/2012 5:14:00 AM
its a wonderful poem . hope u keep on writing poems like this 1 .
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/23/2012 6:48:00 AM
thks :)

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