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As Autumn's Breeze

As Autumn’s Breeze flicks early flakes A fleeting blizzard of snow it makes. While old Jack Frost works hard with glee. To vividly decorate the trees. I watch the pond with great delight For soon ice crystals will unite To make a glassy slippery mirror Oh joy, my skating time is near. Submitted Aug 29, 2016 For As Autumn's Breeze Contest

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Date: 8/29/2017 1:06:00 PM
I like it. Well written and doe's the form justice. Thank you for this!! pat
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Date: 8/30/2016 4:07:00 AM
Succinct and well written Beverly! ; ) 7
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/30/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Connie. Glad you liked it. Beverly
Date: 8/29/2016 4:03:00 PM
Great winter poem x
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/29/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy.
Date: 8/29/2016 3:27:00 PM
Lovely pictorial couplet, Beverly. Good luck with the contest, Barry.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/29/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Barry.

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