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Bright days of autumn have arrived Leaving the unforgotten summer sunshine behind Sneaking in shorter days with less time to play Early nightfall chill under breath warm peaceful sleep Suspended gray hue fog between sky and earth Clouds weep cold rain yet eyes grasp As autumn succeeds a breeze with ease Deciduous trees start undressing their love of joy Turning them from green to, yellow, scarlet, or both Waltzing round and round like a flicker of flame falling to the bottom Among the others becoming one with the earthly carpet knee deep Hopes for harvest affliction reap The rising sun and the darkest night of dreams As winter makes his entrance as snow-flakes fall Arising tall to cold winter frost, ice flowers on window panes Glistening ice crystals on vegetation have withered and hanging limp Unwelcoming blizzard stirs, lifting feathery snow with surprising sweep Adults and children glide and spin effortlessly as their ice skate blades slice through the ice surface Enjoying nature at its finest, skating on a frozen lake
8/28/2016

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Date: 7/2/2019 3:29:00 AM
Eve beautiful! Congrats on your placement!;)
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve:)
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Date: 9/4/2016 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations Eve, well done.
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Date: 9/4/2016 7:39:00 AM
Wow! Those are some crazy trees -- waltzing, undressing, colorfully falling. Congrats!
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Date: 9/3/2016 6:18:00 PM
Eve this is delightful and I adore the picture it is so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/3/2016 6:01:00 PM
Nice poem, Eve. Love the frosted oak leaf. Congrats on your placement. Well deserved.
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:07:00 PM
Eve, so beautiful..Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/3/2016 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful placement Eve! I missed commenting on this amazing entry. ; )
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:19:00 PM
love how you have written this Eve congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow, for my wonderful placement this was a wonderful contest. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/3/2016 2:57:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Eve! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/3/2016 2:28:00 PM
Love how you concentrate on Autumn more at the start then finish coming into winter, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:27:00 PM
A lot of work and effort 10/10 x
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Date: 8/29/2016 9:25:00 AM
Hold your tongue young lady. Im not ready for winter : ) ...lovely poem Eve
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:22:00 AM
Reading your lovely poem, I can very well picturise how Autumn or Snowy Winter would be:) The place where we live, it's just summer and rainy season...even winters are not cold and I have never seen real snow:)
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:57:00 AM
Your poem reflects the words of your image extremely well - great write Eve. Beautiful! Mark
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Date: 8/28/2016 10:24:00 PM
Wonderful write...I don't know much about Autumn living in the tropic!GL :D Sunita
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