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Around the Corner

As I walk downtown I see an alley Where a black cat sat staring up at me, The sound of her purring was so soothing Lulled and hypnotized me how could that be. With its green eyes lightning up the darkness I saw a sign was hanging that said Tea, It seemed to be just around the corner In an alley that led down to the sea. I walk and the black cat seems to follow Awareness of her presence filled the air, In a flash we turned around the corner Where stood an old stone building with one stair. I looked to find the feline now missing, Then climbed the step and gently pushed the door, Cobwebs hung from rafters on the ceiling, The wind made dust balls race across the floor. I noticed tea of all sorts lined each wall, The smells of herbs and spices filled my nose. Sitting in a corner sat a woman, Glaring at me sniffing a thorny rose. Her eyes an emerald green that sparkled Her hair a shiny black darker then night, By her stood a broom with crooked handle My senses told me something was not right. I turned and ran while saying I’m sorry, It seems I’m lost forgive me and good day, Hearing horrid screeches I am shaking Running around the corner in late May. Soaked with sweat I run out to the main street People wonder why I’m carrying on, As I shout loud, don’t go down this alley I turn and notice that it now is gone. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 10.17.2014 For Francine Roberts Contest Around the Corner 2nd

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Date: 3/4/2015 1:38:00 PM
Love it
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:23:00 PM
Quite graphic and full of images which frighten and make us sweat. A bad dream, a vision, a happening so real it defies words, yet you have described it so well. Congratulations! excellent for the prompt, around the corner, Brenda. Happy New Year 2015.
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda on a superb win. Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:09:00 AM
I am back to this poem, as I read it again, I don't know what I was thinking, I knew it was a winner, I said as much. The point I am making is why did I not fav it till now BOING!!!!
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Date: 12/31/2014 8:38:00 AM
Brenda, I don't know how I missed reading this before. A great imaginative tale that keeps the reader's attention with such anticipation to know what happened! Congratulations your wonderful top place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/31/2014 7:05:00 AM
so sorry I missed this spooky tale many congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:38:00 AM
Congrats on the win with this great work Brenda...huggs
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:33:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, well done
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:23:00 PM
Terrific images Brenda, and the flowing was wonderful. It gave me a buzz reading it, nice one - James :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/20/2014 6:56:00 PM
Thank you James.
Date: 10/20/2014 11:23:00 AM
Wake up, wake up Brenda, you're having a nightmare. :) Love the story. So fun to travel with you in your imagination. Peace. :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/20/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 10/19/2014 2:31:00 PM
You will do well in the contest, my dear. Superbly well. :) Cat turned witch turned...into NOTHING. SPOOKY! Hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/19/2014 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Eileen.
Date: 10/19/2014 1:51:00 PM
Wow, you gave me chills, Brenda. Hair on my arms is still standing up. I LOVE the story you wove in verse and coming across that strange woman (perhaps a witch) kept my eyes glued to the screen. What a great Hitchcock-like twist at the end to find the alley is "gone." Brilliant! Francine is sure to love it. Sending winning wishes your way. Love, carolyn
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/19/2014 8:44:00 PM
Thank you dear Carolyn, you are so kind.
Date: 10/19/2014 11:08:00 AM
Oooo, spooky! This is a winner plain and simple. Superb!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/19/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Maurice.
Date: 10/18/2014 4:07:00 PM
I love story poems. This one is perfect for Halloween.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/18/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 10/17/2014 10:51:00 PM
I agree with Dorian and Andrea, great effect and wonderful write. I am going to have to make sure I don't run across the black cat with the green eyes when I walk Peanut at night. Love eve
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/17/2014 11:01:00 PM
Watch out for strange alleys Eve. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 10/17/2014 10:18:00 PM
Eh Brenda are you sure you didn't leave anything of yours behind? Hahahaaaaha, laughing and smiling both while read your humorous scary around the corner tale. Beware! That black witch will catch up with you by Halloween. Better have some garlic silver and crosses just in case she turns into a vampire and a werewolf too. :) lol. Love your poem! hope you do well in this contest! Meanwhile keep your doors and windows closed very tight! Hugs! Love and light! D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/17/2014 10:59:00 PM
I did leave a package but it disappeared. Haha. Thanks Dorian.
Date: 10/17/2014 10:07:00 PM
oohh very twilight zone like!!! GREAT story. It works well for the story contest as well as ARound the Corner!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/17/2014 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I finally found something for this one though.

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