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Does foreshadowing have the upper hand on paranoid anticipation? Take a left on Friendship Avenue. When need is greatest, see who runs fastest; cherish those who remain. Make a right on Family Boulevard. So many young faces; where did elders go? Even Neighborhood Drive is less friendly now What became of those who gave it character? Have they moved? No Mr. Rogers on this block. Beaten down by relentlessly spinning wheels, Grim Reaper Street remains. Once hidden, now vivid when you round Memory Lane. Only thoughts for companions as Father Time chimes incessantly, bridging the past, present and future. An empty way station waits at the end of the line, when secrets around all corners finally are revealed.
*Written October 11, 2014

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Date: 10/12/2014 7:29:00 PM
Hello Carolyn.....A very well crafted piece...I love the names of the streets the streets....Very nicely done
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:16:00 PM
Hello Carolyn, Most Excellent!! I really liked the "drive" aspect of your poem. What a very interesting way to approach this theme. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/11/2014 11:13:00 PM
Bravo Carolyn, enjoyed this drive. Good luck!
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:23:00 PM
At 60 I can relate to this poem quite well. "Only thoughts for companions as Father Time chimes incessantly, bridging the past, present and future." Solid gold my friend!
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Date: 10/11/2014 12:52:00 PM
Who drives faster, answer is clearly given by you. Loved much your lines "Only thoughts for companions as Father Time chimes incessantly, bridging the past, present and future". Loved always, my lovely genius friend,bl
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Date: 10/11/2014 12:48:00 PM
With technology the friendly neighborhood chatter seems to be dissipating...Spectacular write Carolyn...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/11/2014 11:20:00 AM
Profound and saddening as the past unveils itself in our memories but our eyes reveals the present unfolding with future waiting at the end of the line! A great one, Carolyn! Love
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:20:00 AM
Carolyn, I can relate to your driving thru time poem since I am 77. Yet, by your picture you still have a lot of driving to do! Not so for me. But, I am thankful God will be waiting for me at the end of the line. Blessings, Darlene
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/11/2014 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. Let me see what you've been writing!

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