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Arisen - Great Glory With Each New Dawn

Arisen - Great Glory With Each New Dawn When tragedy crushes day and dark night, remnants of evil darkness thunders forth. Then man's evil proceeds with all its might as coldest wind blasting from the far North. Hence my crying to - hold loving ship straight and beseeching the One for mercy then. Yet for such- one must abandon their hate, learn to honor and love all other men. With such faith- stormy waters are banished invisible voice calming raging seas. The evil and darkness both are vanquished answered are sincere, faithfully prayed pleas. Arisen - great glory with each new dawn. Beautiful flowers on each renewed lawn. Robert J. Lindley, 11-23-2015 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 100 Note- Perfect, 100 word sonnet, perfect 10's. Finally, hit the mark on a first draft...

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Date: 11/23/2015 12:01:00 PM
- A second chance - a beautiful sonnet, Robert (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:34:00 AM
The turmoils that we experience each new day may seem to be overwhelming, but with faith and prayers stormy seas can be calmed. Robert, this wonderful spiritual piece is so beautiful and inspirational! A-7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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