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Are You Proud?

She hear your whispers See your stares You can't hurt her Her soul already been destroyed By the lies you tell Feels like she's been walking through hell Feelings burned Someone else is taking control of Her mind You did this to her You have to live With the choice you made Are you proud about the fact It's your daughter you betrayed It's your daughter's soul That is left unclaimed.....

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Matthew Pawlak

Date: 12/29/2008 1:56:00 PM

Very powerful peicefilled with lots of emotin.Good write.....Matt

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 12/15/2008 4:04:00 PM

Hey to you, Breana! This is a well written piece, though it is heart-wrenching; filled with loss and pain. I don't think that whoever was responsible for this, could possibly be proud. Hopefully some mending might occur..maybe a few bridges built? Perhaps it would be best to do what Christy has written, go out and seek this help...won't do any wrong to try. I wish for you happiness and great joys in your tomorrows...God bless you, Breana! Love to you...Mikki

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/15/2008 4:46:00 AM

I don't know how old you are or even if this is true, but if it is, find you a church close by your home, there you will find a caring place to bring you comfort, and an ear that will always listen...this write breaks my heart, so sad, always, Christy