Arcane Vision

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There’s more than the eye can see Gorgeous beauty revealing enormous constellations Deep in the vast of time between the murmurous of generations Sonorous sounds escape through hummed earth whispers and fade Silent surreal piety beauty veil in transparent silk tulle shade Trapped in an illusion in the depths of darkness wink Through the corridors of time, thirsty for a moment of a dazzling glimpse Arcane inner yearning into the heart deeper than the ocean All the seas and the universe motion Mesmerized to serve its whimsical notions 4/27/2016 MORE THAN THE EYE CAN SEE - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose GORGEOUS –SURREAL- SONOROUS- DAZZLING -MURMUROUS -CORRIDORS -ARCANE

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/20/2016 10:16:00 AM

Big congrats Eve to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/20/2016 7:58:00 AM

A masterpiece, Eve. Congrats on your win.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/20/2016 7:54:00 AM

wow! Sweet Eve, this is just magical...so alive lovely lady....congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/30/2016 6:47:00 AM

A captivating dance of words and expressions dear, Eve!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/28/2016 1:15:00 PM

Through the corridors of time, thirsty for a moment of a dazzling glimpse. These words of yours....my heart resonated to. What more do we want that one dazzling moment that makes it all make sense. Good luck in the contest, dear.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen, for your wonderful words of inspiration. Hugs sweet friend

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/28/2016 6:35:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2016 10:44:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi, for your visit and wonderful compliment. Hugs dear friend