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April Gave Herself To Me

Dear April gave herself to me; May probably will as well-- Although neither know the other And sweet June will never tell! But Summer cannot know of them, It would put me in a spot. Besides, my heart does long for her-- For summer's really hot! M :-)

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Brooke Dylan

Date: 5/2/2014 7:02:00 AM

HA HA... a playboy...lol... so delightful to read... You are a true artist.. Brooke

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/3/2014 8:16:00 AM

I MIGHT TAKE A LTTLE WINE..LOL cant handle brandy..lol but I would love too.. come visit me any time. Brooke

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/3/2014 12:27:00 AM

Until I get caught lol. No, just a poet with a very vivid imagination. But don't tell April, May, June or Summer. I've got a good thing goin and I'd hate to lose it I'll be dropping be your crib again real soon. Meanwhile, feel free to drop in--hell, you can crash on the couch if like--with stacks of poems to read--and some brandy, you'll need it :)

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/27/2014 9:18:00 AM

Sweet poem :)Ana

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/28/2014 3:04:00 AM

Thank you Ana. I hope life's treating you fair. I very much appreciate your reading this poem and for taking the time to so graciously comment. Hugs ;-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/26/2014 4:12:00 PM

Cute! I'm rather partial to June myself. I may warn her of your relationships with April and May so that I may have her all to myself.

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/28/2014 3:14:00 AM

LOL. I figured you--with your Canadian wit--would get and appreciate this fun little wordplay. Dude, I'm serious. Do not mention April or May to June, cuz that would ruin my chances with summer, and she's hot! Now I ask you, honestly. Ever read anything that off-the-cuff clever and funny? No. Go soup mail everyone you know and share that--priceless :-)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/26/2014 3:16:00 PM

You really know how to work, without getting cought. Good work... Lucilla

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/28/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thank you, Lucilla my wise and witty friend. I told Richard not to tell April anything May or June, cuz that would ruin my chances with summer, and she's hot! Get it? Ha Ha ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2014 12:51:00 PM

Very amusing Mel! Hugs Jan x

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/28/2014 3:18:00 AM

Want a real laugh? Check out my reply to Richard's comment, Tee Hee ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2014 2:20:00 AM

One of the best Limericks l have read, no joke. I delighted in reading it Mel.

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/26/2014 2:56:00 AM

Connie, my friend, how have you been? I just felt like lightening things up a bit with this. It popped in my head from God knows where. But, I'm glad you liked it. It's a fun wordplay, at least. Have a great weekend. xo :-)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/25/2014 9:14:00 PM

geez, your a hoot :) xx

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/28/2014 3:21:00 AM

Coolness, check out my reply to Richard's comment. It is the height of wit and whimsy--yours truly at his clever and funny best. Later, poet champion ;-)

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/26/2014 12:58:00 AM

That's what my mother used to say. No, it was, you're cute...yeah, that was it. And I rock! xo ;-)