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Heart aches a great deal.
Feeling the guilt' real.
Pouring through my eyes is tears;
Unable to put in words my fears.
Though am the partial wrong doer'
I wouldn't like to justify, as it is over.

And to you i sing this apology song,
As i cannot forget you for a second long,
For the mistake i committed,  knowing,
Just avoiding your advices from following.
Frightened, that the love you bestowed would cease,
I plead you to forgive me and bestow your love in ease.
Punish me with word or hand.
Never ever band me from experiencing your love,
As you are my second mother,
And my heart gives  no place to another.
Accept my apology!

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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Poignant write Shabna! Apologies take courage to give and understanding to accept. I love how you've expressed the thought of punishment - it's better to be punished than to lose love - very nicely said!

    rafeek Avatar shabna rafeek
    Date: 2/16/2013 8:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you vicky for reading my poem and commenting....
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:57:00 AM
    A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Shabna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

    rafeek Avatar shabna rafeek
    Date: 12/21/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you carol.. your words are itself an inspiration, thanks for reading my poem. i am new to this place and i hope to write more, being inspired by the senior writers present here... i wish u all help me.. thank you.. hugz <3.. have a nice weekend
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:12:00 AM
    I think it would read more smoothly if you said, "Apologize to me." Wishing you the best. Hugs, Catie :)

    rafeek Avatar shabna rafeek
    Date: 12/21/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you catie for your comment.. i appreciate all ur comments they inspire me more to write more... hugz.. :) <3