Apologies

Contrition is as its definition Forgiveness, Guilt, Sadness… Sorrow is as the same Pardon, Shame, Unhappiness… But is contrition an apology Is contrition truly the feeling, Of what is as the definition? Does repentance cast away our sins? Does it rid us of our shame? Contrition is as its definition A deadly game of perception The most we see Is not to me Its the same as my obsession…

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Jared Pickett

Date: 7/20/2009 11:59:00 PM

wonderous word-play....Good write....:JP)

Date: 7/18/2009 5:36:00 PM

Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 7/15/2009 12:18:00 PM

Excellent poem Ciara>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/14/2009 1:12:00 PM

Ciara, congrats on your feature...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 4:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Ciara. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/13/2009 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem. More blessings and power. God bless. Ernilando

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 10:55:00 PM

Beautiful work congratulations on being featured this week .. Jayne

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2009 6:59:00 PM

Wow Ciara, Great flow of words, this is a very creative piece. Congrats on your awesome poet being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

Neldy Jolo

Date: 7/9/2009 7:48:00 AM

Apology is great gift to someone! nice and its realy great. wow! please do more to inspire!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2009 4:45:00 AM

Ciara, I have enjoyed reading the poetry you have posted. I will look forward to seeing and reading more poetry by you.Your writing is wonderful. Love, Carol