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Answerku 2

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Answerku 2

"Can you keep my secret?"
I really want to.
But it's so hard.

"Which one will save my life?"
When the fire burns
water will quench.

"What is our middle ground?"
There is no such thing.
We're both alone.

"What if there is no clue?"
Then clueless we are.
We will survive.

Original Questionku was from Chaz Cheesman's Questionku 5-8

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:50:00 AM
    This is really cool, especially the last bit 'Then clueless we are. / We will survive.' The last line resonates. Great job :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Ooooh i like what u have done with these Rick. Good responses :-) - Shaz

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/19/2012 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Inspired by your great questions.