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Another Roll of Two Ply

Messages scribbled on the bathroom stall I can't even comprehend it all The number is fake And I never met Jake But that interpretational art has got my attention I think there's something I forgot to mention I scribbled my poems in erasable ink And some one has changed them With a marker that's pink I believe his words right So my pen says goodnight Farewell to all Its always the same in The End ***No one will read this crap anyways***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/26/2017 8:59:00 AM
GOTD! Well, at least a big smile, starting with the title;-) Dang I-net is so slow I can't do much trolling for GOTD! candidates:-( Cheerios amigo!
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Date: 1/24/2017 12:05:00 AM
I love your message on that wall, and will read that crap any day, any day.
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Date: 1/23/2017 10:11:00 PM
Two ply?? I pack my own industrial strength. No chance for a breakthrough...
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Date: 1/23/2017 6:53:00 PM
Sounds like they need to open a window. I believe that smell is messing with your vision. I love bathroom humor:):)Soup me and I'll send you a couple:):)
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Date: 1/23/2017 5:06:00 PM
That was me knocking from the stall beside, to pass over some two ply. This is well kind of Vasoy, I can feel the sadness.
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Date: 1/23/2017 5:02:00 PM
I did ........lol..Seren
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:48:00 PM
Keep that pen going Tim. Your poetry is amazing :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:30:00 PM
- I hope your pen never say goodbye, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 1:31:00 PM
Crap = Creative, Relatable, Amazing Poetry. Kind of sad Tim but your message and thoughts are expressed wonderfully.
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Date: 1/23/2017 12:32:00 PM
Its not nice if someone plays or changes anybody 's words...Goodbyes? I hope this is not about you Tim.Btw-your poem reminds me of those eighties songs with scribbles on the wall.This is different and I like different.
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Date: 1/23/2017 11:54:00 AM
Hey I read it and no saying goodbye Tim and its not crap anyway as I have the crown for poop poems ... hmm I've not seen a message on a toilet wall in years lol - :-) hugs Jan xx
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