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Another Cinderella Version

As mean as anyone could be In the land of the North Sea Was a girl drinking her afternoon tea As she was waiting for her dad under the fig tree Not only he would bring a stepmother But also some other And as they arrived one after another Cinderella found things to do rather Acting as if they didn’t even exist Cinderella didn’t offer any assist And as if she couldn’t resist, She assigned them with a list. As days were passing by, The father could not rely And without saying any goodbye He made everyone’s eyes dry. Left as the one in charge of the house, Cinderella killed her friend the mouse And had nobody to fix her blouse As she was preparing to meet a spouse. Once Cinderella got a ball invitation She didn’t tell her sisters of the location So you can imagine their frustration As they tried to do a negotiation. While dancing, Cinderella was surprised To see her stepsisters disguised And realized she had treated them as despised Rather than how her father had advised. Cinderella asked for forgiveness And her sisters did so with their goodness And without realizing that the prince is a witness They remained with stillness. As the Prince was impressed He decided to marry them and be blessed And as Cinderella realized that her future was messed She decided to head west.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/26/2016 12:00:00 AM
Nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:38:00 PM
hope to see you back this year 2016
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:27:00 AM
Speranta, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2015 2:00:00 PM
Hello Speranta, still enjoying this verse of CInderrella. I was hoping to see you post a new poem... LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:22:00 PM
Speranta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/21/2015 1:31:00 PM
- Hello Speranta :) - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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