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Another Waltz Movement

ANOTHER WALTZ MOVEMENT this one starts softly with a compelling rhythm catching at the feet nor complexity nor controlling intellect but mildly wild, free the lights, red wine invitation to the dance and she willingly now her gown sweeps out in three-quarter harmony with others i see and the flow begins circling within a circle so casually the charming first theme slowly gathers momentum swelling by degree till the rainbows merge mood becomes electric a whirling ecstasy! how describe the theme such as never heard before driving endlessly. describe the movement infinite grace, precision? fools might tell, not me ah, recollection my familiar waltz movement my fond fantasy

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Date: 8/3/2013 4:36:00 PM
Hey Daver! Well, you certainly have not lost your wonderfully creative touch. Can visualize this splendid event, an eloquent dancer, formal but at the same time runs this "electric" current. Sounds as though she has the heart of a gypsy. The magic and mysteries of music. Keep well! Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:26:00 AM
this is a great write. second read brings all in focus. i wondered what a senryu was. thanks for reading & commenting on mine. ran
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Date: 5/18/2013 3:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very creative and unique work..I am thinking of the song "Save The Last Dance For Me"..Thanks for your visit..I do think that there is muscadine wine but I have never tried any..I just pig out staning next to the muscadine grape vines until my belly is filled with sweet delight..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:49:00 AM
a gorgeous one, Daver. I like Barbara's comment. Can I have the dance after her?
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:26:00 PM
Oh Daver, what a beauty..can I have this dance? BG
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