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Below is the poem entitled ANOTHER WALTZ MOVEMENT which was written by poet daver austin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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this one starts softly
with a compelling rhythm
catching at the feet

nor complexity
nor controlling intellect
but mildly wild, free

the lights, red wine
invitation to the dance
and she willingly

now her gown sweeps out
in three-quarter harmony
with others i see

and the flow begins
circling within a circle
so casually

the charming first theme
slowly gathers momentum
swelling by degree

till the rainbows merge
mood becomes electric a
whirling ecstasy!

how describe the theme
such as never heard before
driving endlessly.

describe the movement
infinite grace, precision?
fools might tell, not me

ah, recollection
my familiar waltz movement
my fond fantasy

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  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Hey Daver! Well, you certainly have not lost your wonderfully creative touch. Can visualize this splendid event, an eloquent dancer, formal but at the same time runs this "electric" current. Sounds as though she has the heart of a gypsy. The magic and mysteries of music. Keep well! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:26:00 AM
    this is a great write. second read brings all in focus. i wondered what a senryu was. thanks for reading & commenting on mine. ran

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your very creative and unique work..I am thinking of the song "Save The Last Dance For Me"..Thanks for your visit..I do think that there is muscadine wine but I have never tried any..I just pig out staning next to the muscadine grape vines until my belly is filled with sweet delight..Sara

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:49:00 AM
    a gorgeous one, Daver. I like Barbara's comment. Can I have the dance after her?

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Oh Daver, what a beauty..can I have this dance? BG