Angel's Wings

Angel’s wings unfold Soul's anticipation mounts Paradise raptures! © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 NOVEMBER 2014

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/20/2015 1:40:00 PM

Beautiful pen Demetrios! I really enjoyed your very pretty haiku, my dear friend. Very peaceful and serene.A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/20/2015 1:45:00 PM

Good to see you again my good friend, Dorian! Thank you so much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/10/2015 9:21:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one Demetrios.

Twanna Irisha

Date: 12/2/2014 5:55:00 PM

Very nice.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/13/2014 8:18:00 AM

An important possitive outlook on a complex topic, fully covered with such few words.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2014 8:47:00 AM

Merci mon ami, Maurice! On the subject I am somehow expert since three times I came close to die and for thirty so years I console people on the passing away of their love ones thus is not just words!

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/12/2014 8:56:00 PM

An inspirational Haiku. And I too, look forward to that last journey.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 11/13/2014 9:25:00 AM

Demetrios, would you mind elaborating on what your almost death experience was from. (heart attack?) Or have you explained in a poem? If so, which one? Thanks and I'm glad you are still here with us. God is good! Darlene

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2014 8:49:00 AM

More than inspirational my dearest Darlene! Look at my comment above! Thank you for visiting. It is so kind of you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2014 1:44:00 AM

Gorgeous!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Richard!

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/9/2014 2:55:00 PM

Demetrios, I look forward to taking this momentous trip too some day. Very beautifully rendered here. A "7" and a FAV!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so much mein guter freund, Gary! One day, for certain we take this trip for no one misses it! Ich danke dich fur the generous mark and comment!