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Angel Dust

The dewy morning’s pink dawn When the doe with her new born fawn Steps out of the glen Dancing to the song of the wren Then angel dust is seen When the baby girl in her sweet sleep Smiles with pretty dimples so deep Fills tenderness in the mother’s eyes As she wistfully looks at the skies Then angel dust is seen When the old lady around the corner Warms her hands on the tin burner And a passerby around her gently places A warm shawl with soft laces Then angel dust is seen When life becomes hard and dark There are no new songs from the lark Trials and heartbreak knock at the door And every day is a heavy chore Then angel dust is seen It whispers softly with the breeze And settles on those weak and dry trees Magic gently plays on the heart strings A harbinger of gentle springs Angel dust is seen 09/10/12 By- Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2013 3:30:00 AM
Tahera its great. rhyming is perfect great
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:09:00 AM
I wish all things were this way..very nice..thanks for the comment...Holly Moore
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:46:00 PM
HI TAHERA, , congratulations in Gail's "Angel Dust " sweet contest... always~ PD
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Date: 10/25/2012 11:24:00 AM
Such imagery! Very unique write... This one was definately my favorite... Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 10/24/2012 7:12:00 PM
congrats on a great win Yesha
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:56:00 PM
CONGRATS TAHERA ON AN EXQUISITE WRITE AND BEAUTIFUL TOP TEN WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/24/2012 11:50:00 AM
A super congratulations to you on your win in Gail's "ANGEL DUST" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 11:48:00 AM
This is absolutely exquisite, Tahera...the 3rd stanza really floored me...excellent! - Tim (and congratulations on your win!)
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/24/2012 11:45:00 PM
Thanks a ton Tim.
Date: 10/24/2012 10:48:00 AM
This is truly lovely and deserving. Love. Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2012 9:10:00 AM
wow!!Excellent poem..I like it friend Tahera. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs!! (^__^)
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Date: 10/24/2012 8:27:00 AM
congratulations on a worthy win here xx
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Date: 10/23/2012 3:28:00 AM
I am putting this poem straight into my favorites file Tahera. It is divinely written. I love it! It brought tears to my eyes. Blessings
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/23/2012 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 10/9/2012 11:50:00 PM
Pretty verses, but make an important change the previous people who commented missed: In the second line of the first verse, change "his" to "her". A doe is a female deer.
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/10/2012 1:36:00 AM
Thanks Robert
Date: 10/9/2012 8:15:00 AM
So lovely write my friend. Keeps me smiling with my dimples too. I love it. Thank you so much for sharing! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/9/2012 3:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem Tahera.Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:48:00 AM
This is a real masterpiece crafted with superb ingenuity! 'Astounding' is an understatement.
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