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Andy Meets Sandy

Andy meets Sandy Sitting among the crowed of workers Awaiting the arrival of his Excellency The executive governor of the promise land The promise keeper; I beheld angel, with a dark brown eyes Conspicuously hidden among the crowd I was overwhelmed by the beauty of her dark brown eyes She looked so pretty and angelic as she stared beyond the crowd; When I couldn’t take it again, I moved to her side. Her dark brown hair shone in the sun light, Her skin was soft as the velvet clothe When I asked her name, she said sandy in a sweet melodious voice. O sandy, don’t leave my side, don’t leave me alone, O sandy I love you..... Don’t leave me alone. Have got a big heart that can fill your love. As long as I live I will always love you.... As she leaves my side to meet her friend, I wrote her a love panegyric poem I panegyrize Sweet sandy, Then she collected the poem and wrote thank you Andy. For; Sandy Joy

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Date: 5/19/2013 1:54:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:22:00 PM
Hi Andrew, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:22:00 PM
about your poem: I like the story and the verse in your poem. a very nice way in thanking someone... always~ Linda
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:21:00 PM
Andrew,, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2013 3:27:00 AM
- Really enjoyable to read your work, lovely written.- Thank you, Andrew. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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