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Andrew died 3 months old

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Andrew died 3 months old

The black crows are gathering overhead,
The roses bloom in seasons all their own,
The green hills I once loved, seem distant and dead
This garden will soon be overgrown. 
My child was taken by  God’s hand,
And I am left to try and understand.
Where is my gentle Andrew?
The doctors said it was heart defect,
But I disagree,
His little heart was perfect,
It was just not his time to be.
Oh will that Sun ever stop judging me?
It wasn’t my fault.
Will the moonlight ever be kind to me?
Or will I be the target for another insult? 
Tonight I will not do the dishes,
Tonight I will not grant your wishes,
Tonight I will raise the glass of hemlock to my lip,
And I pray to God to give me the courage to sip.

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Catherine, I am very sorry for your loss. I hope you find solitude in the fact that everyone here loves you. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 11:12:00 PM
    You have expressed your heartbreaking pain beautifully in this poignant piece. I love children and can't imagine your loss. So sorry that happened to you. It sounds as though you are being divinely guided and that is a blessing. Love,

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:39:00 AM
    I am sorry about your son, Tunke. No, it was not your fault, and you will have another chance in the future. Have faith. Will you enter my new contest, if you may? It's called "Impress me". I'll be glad to see you there. :) G.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:14:00 PM
    sad...

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 7/17/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed..in fact it is even more than sad.. it's the end.
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:12:00 AM
    Very sad very beautiful loving poem, glad you shared it.

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 6/27/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is kind of you to say so Arthur
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Catherine, I am so very sorry for your loss. I too have lost a baby and my life has never been the same nor will it. You wrote beautiful and I pray you continue to write and I thank you for sharing with us.

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 6/17/2013 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie. I can sense your grief. Perhaps one day we will all understand why this happens? I like to believe my son is an angel in heaven. Maybe I'm silly but it comforts me.
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Please keep your nasty comments to your self...do not visit any of my poems again...

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 6/14/2013 3:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Please keep you inane suggestions to your self
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Will the moonlight ever been kind to me? Outstanding but been should be the word be. Women are so highly related to their children in poems that they write. It is scary sometimes to wonder if what is in the poem just may be true. Jim Horn

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:39:00 PM
    That is what I wanted to hear about my poem. You people are fast. While I was changing it you were already analyzing it. Check out corrections I have made. Also, feel free to make recommendations any time that you want to. I really like this website and my poetry writing has been improving everyday. I did just put this poem together under short notice when related and syncopated came to mind. Writing poetry and improving are a continual process. jthorn5656@atmc.net

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:47:00 PM
    I too, will add my comments to Tim and Andrea's below,, this is so sad, so tragic, your poetry as a beauty of it's own, one that will help the reader, especially those also who have lost a love one....

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 6/5/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comments . It helps to know people care
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:28:00 AM
    oh, my, tim said the right word for this one, heart wrenching and a very touching one. I'm sorry this happened to you. This is very good writing, dear.

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 5/25/2013 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words. Since Andrew passed away I have not been able to breathe properly. Maybe one day I will.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:03:00 AM
    Heart-wrenching and beautiful at the same time...Vivid description of the grieving process...So glad to have come across your poetry this evening Catherine...Keep writing! - Tim

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 5/23/2013 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind comments Tim. I guess we all have our crosses to bare.