Get Your Premium Membership

And When You Look At Me

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Roy Jerden.


Listen to poem:
And when you look at me once more a little smile, a passing glance, I look at you and cross the floor, to beg if I might have this dance. You shyly dance, and look aside, and when you look at me once more, with fairy face and eyes so wide, I want to dance forevermore. A tender kiss our lips explore, with pounding heart and soul in flight, and when you look at me once more, I pray I've found my love tonight. A passion that I can't disguise, this kiss that touched my very core, and then I see it in your eyes, and when you look at me once more. January 24, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/19/2016 5:54:00 AM
Nice story about having this framed as a gift for your wife, Roy. Flowers fade and die, chocolates get eaten. But this gift will last the rest of your lives.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2016 7:53:00 PM
Congrats at your win, Roy! I seem to remember you being quite the hilarious poet, but now I see you can write tender-hearted as well. I love your refrain line! It's the star of the show...
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2016 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations. Now, I'm not the one to surger coat anything, ask the members who spend there life on this site. With that said, this should not have won "1st" ...sorry. But hey, I didn't judge sooo nice work though... Smh
Login to Reply
Anderson Avatar
Jimmy Anderson
Date: 2/19/2016 8:45:00 AM
Roy, your piece is good work. And although I consider myself A Godly man to a certain extent, we are all poets, I myself a published poet, been on this site since 2010 round about. I hate alot of fake azz poets comments on here. Tell it like it is. Jeez... We need the positive and negative criticism on our work!
Jerden Avatar
Roy Jerden
Date: 2/18/2016 1:15:00 PM
At last an unvarnished comment! I wish we could see more of them. I see you have no skin in this game, so I'll take it as honest, but not helpful, as it lacks detail. I would agree with you, except that all the others I read, save one, were worse. So first place, but in a slow horse race is how I would see it.
Date: 2/18/2016 11:12:00 AM
Great poem, congratulations!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2016 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved top spot!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2016 2:42:00 AM
Congrats Roy, for your amazing poem's first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 10:58:00 PM
Absolutely romantic Roy.. congrats on top place win..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Very romantic, written well, read well.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 3:16:00 PM
This really is beautiful
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 2:28:00 PM
This poem is beautifully romantic Roy. Congratulations on your first place win. Very deserved my friend! #7
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 10:17:00 AM
Roy, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
Login to Reply
Jerden Avatar
Roy Jerden
Date: 2/17/2016 5:08:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! First time I've ever placed so well in a contest judged by you.
Date: 2/17/2016 10:03:00 AM
Ahh.....so lovely to see that romance is in the air, to never fade away! Congrats to you, Roy !!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 8:38:00 AM
Roy, thank you for the support. :) SK
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2016 10:15:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic, and so nicely done, Roy. Congratulations on your fine win in Andrea's contest. Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2016 6:10:00 AM
This is quite lovely, Roy. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2016 5:20:00 AM
A beautiful Quatern, Roy. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2016 4:18:00 AM
ROY, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2016 8:08:00 PM
What a beautiful poem--a 7+! Janice
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2016 6:38:00 PM
This is super sweet and well written for its meter and many of the other things I am looking for when I judge a contest. Congrats for your great win.
Login to Reply
Jerden Avatar
Roy Jerden
Date: 2/6/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I wrote this one for my wife who always wanted a poem about when we first met, in February. This was her birthday gift, which I had framed. She was ecstatic.
Date: 1/25/2016 6:44:00 AM
Eyes say a lot, most men don't take the time to listen. Like the poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs