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And the Rose Faded

Once upon a time In many peoples lives Males met a female And they turned into wives The garden was so fertile Many seeds were sown So many lawns were laid Our spirits having grown Undulations rise As relationships recede Do we finally reach That point of exceed This garden can no longer Grow green, prosper and true It's like the Autumn season It can die in front of you Ones soul can be so broken Just like it has been raided When your levy breaks You know your rose has faded http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-3.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/23/2009 1:55:00 PM
It's like the Autumn season, it can die infront of you, I absolutely adore this poem James, and the lines above especially, excellent excellent write, I looked for your roses.. Thankyou for your lovely comments on my poem, love Jo xx
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:48:00 PM
nicley penned, great work
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:41:00 AM
I love this poem James, it does relate to many people and myself included. Pam
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:07:00 AM
The roses fade in many relationships, James, but the garden is filled with beautiful flowers. Hope that helps a bit. I know this lovely poem comes straight from your heart. Truly a brilliant analogy! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:52:00 PM
Amazing truth in this one James, the rose does so often fade. I've enjoyed your poetry tonight very much. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:13:00 PM
I know exactly what you mean, James. relationships are disposable.
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