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And in my meditation, I find myself walking on a sea shore, under a night sky, and I notice my feet have left no footprints. A deep blue sea is inviting me and I am drifting in deep tranquility, until I notice a beautiful black horse on the shoreline waiting. I hear him beckoning to me and he bends down so I can climb on his back, I caress his mane, so thick and soft and we are thundering in snow; through a dark forest and my raven hair is floating behind me in waves, but it is not my hair, it is the horse's mane and I am that black horse. Then, I leap off a cliff and I am falling, falling, falling . . . and I am a majestic white bird floating, drifting, dipping, gliding. ___________________ November 23, 2016 Poetry/Verse/And In My Meditation Copyright Protected, ID 16- 852-187-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the Contest 241 sponsor, Brian Strand Sixth Place

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Date: 11/25/2016 11:12:00 AM
Gorgeous poem, Broken. Congrats. :)
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Date: 11/23/2016 7:42:00 AM
A lovely fantasy:)
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Date: 11/23/2016 6:41:00 AM
Such an enchanting and mesmerizing dream you have left for us to enjoy this morning. This was simply beautiful and the ending was perfect.
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Date: 11/23/2016 1:01:00 AM
Captivating. Meditated 'dreams' are the best and often so revealing. Thank for the sharing. Peace, Love and Joy.
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