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An Unshakable Identity

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This poem is dedicated to the middle belt region of Nigeria which is experiencing a massive invasion from the Northern part with a heavy influx of the Hausas and Fulanis with the hope to possess its lands and stamp their cultures in these 'settling' regions. It is also dedicated to any part of the world experiencing such atrocity

hospitality, peace and mutual respect; we’ve chosen because the key to our prosperity is love, unity and cooperation settlers now on the cheat as our true identity is kept frozen but no matter what! We will reverse it with our landmark ordination the threats against our heritage and culture may have risen it has kept us unique, unshakable and uncompromising though there are bastard judases in every dozen the failure and exposure of their deeds are amusing the buckles of our identity we will never loosen no matter how the invader tries strategizing or putting our inheritance into some sort of categorizing No! is the answer, none of us will lose being a complete citizen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/30/2015 9:48:00 AM
i wish at times if there were no boundaries and walls around,, my heart goes out your words are priceless as it actually defines the suffering and hardship of a large mass of people there,,the world is running hard ,,i just pray for the peace to prevail here and there ..#loved it Funom Makama ,,ty for your words
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Kamran Rashid
Date: 2/4/2015 1:59:00 PM
Your word choices and colorful vocabulary make this a very interesting and thoughtful read. You paint a picture with words that bring your memories alive in the reader's mind, where we too can feel what you feel for awhile as you take the reader to your private place of pain that it is still fresh and piercing. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/5/2015 12:29:00 PM
Oh dear friend... Your words are heart romancing and very very encouraging.... I read them carefully and there's nothing much I can say other than much much gratitude... Thanks you very much!
Date: 2/1/2015 10:38:00 AM
Oh! God save all of you, I pray to Him. If any wrong is done by an individual or by many collectively, whatever they may be, God administers all with His unforeseen magic wand of JUSTICE through the Nature, i believe. God gives good sense to those who are really good and gives bad sense to the bad. No one can fly away from this. See the World TRUE History. Wonderful poem on reality. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:06:00 AM
AMEN!!!!!!! BL Devnath... Thank you a zillion for your priceless words of encouragement. That is our earnest prayer (My people and I).... And by God's grace, it would be answered...
Date: 1/31/2015 6:14:00 PM
I pray for God's hand of humanity to reign. May it swiftly sweep evil aside and his love replace and abide. PEACE!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:05:00 AM
AMEN!! And once again AMEN! Thank you very much Robert
Date: 1/31/2015 12:35:00 AM
This is the third time I've come online to read this, Funom. Your true identiy far surpasses the character of those who threaten your homeland. Power, greed and morbid destructiion. It is all so senseless! Written with your heart and soul, yet you maintain rational manner. You are the blessed one, Funom. Keep well, stay safe, Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Mikki and as always.... You are a source of huge encouragement to me
Date: 1/29/2015 7:02:00 AM
powerful write and truly this must be heard by all! I have few poems that talks about atrocity! one is this prose poetry Rwanda's buried calvary.. :)---olive eloisa
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:03:00 AM
Really??? I will definitely check it out. Thank you a million for your immense contribution here...
Date: 1/28/2015 4:41:00 PM
I have looked over your poetry and i love your inimitable style. A great message for the Boko Haram. I coined a phrase: "What we need is less tribes and more diversity"!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:02:00 AM
Yes my friend... we need less tribes but more diversity... But unfortunately, nature has made it what it is... Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging comment

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