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An Unforgettable Crime, Between Sunrise and Sunset

An Unforgettable Crime, Between Sunrise and Sunset Mankind shall never forget their choice and misdeed. Yes! He was highly displeased. An incident like none ever before. A betrayal of love and trust, that caused an eternity of fuss. It happen in a small garden, a village called Eden, in the state of paradise. Population not many, but the animals were plenty. A golden law was broken. The guilty parties attempted to flee, and ran through the trees. Not knowing, there was no escape from this place. The guilty, were called and did not respond. It was as if an evil light came on. One whispered to the other “let’s lay low and maybe He’ll go”. An alert was issued nationwide. A subpoena was served; the two knew they were jailbirds. When asked, why were you hiding? The leader spoke and said, “I was influenced by the other party you introduced to me”. “I was misled. You should have known, it wasn’t a good match. I don’t want to leave this home”. The voice said to them, “a forbidden law was broken”. A one man jury and judge were appointed. The jury deliberated on the spot and justice was hot. They were told, “Go on your way”. The world will never forget this day. What was perfect became imperfect. Now you know. “A simple bite of life can forever change you and your wife”. The sentencing was fair. Both were told to leave. As they departed, I heard one say “Come On Eve”. Dr. “G”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 6:04:00 PM
Franklin, wow they should have payed more attention... i guess even evil can sway into any open era... your poem was very interesting.. almost like an eclipse... excellent work...always~ pd
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Date: 5/21/2012 2:20:00 PM
Very well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:59:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Franklin. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 11:20:00 AM
Franklin, very good and clever..David
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