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Words just seem to come across my mind without reason or rhyme; Can't really tell you why, something like an equation but not as simple, like what if the plus was without the minus sign. My words are superior with excellence, a mixture of the best is what I suggest.... In celebration of poetry-to express these spoken words,using my art to inspire. Bringing hearts together that desire-using my words to bless. Words can sprinkle a little happiness with a touch of finesse. But can also defeat those who may not believe in themselves and beyond their dreams. Many people can attest to using words to with explain or sustain. I use my words to tell the world who indeed I am blessed. Words come across my mind, can't give you any other reason why. I just wanted to bless you with this original piece, by me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 8:58:00 PM
Hi Laura,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...
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Date: 9/8/2013 11:41:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup,Laura ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 7:55:00 PM
A great piece to make a 1st impression. It's never easy to say what's on our mind in a way that will grab the reader's attention, especially if they don't know who we are. But, you did this so eloquently...great to meet you, Laura!
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:33:00 PM
Nicely conceived thoughts Laura. I enjoyed reading your first poem here. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 9/8/2013 4:41:00 PM
original and wonderful, Laura, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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