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An Ordeal To Be Forgotten

Dear diary, My vented heart speaks to you today, Help me forget the terrible bygones; The misfortunes of a young girl, The pain that she felt In the coercion of another’s body’s act, Her screams that were wasted In crying out for help, The violent hunger that unleashed Itself on her naïve innocence. The animals that bit her all over, Left her abandoned in a place where No one could find her. The night soon followed her, It was darkness that embraced her Bruised beauty. She lay in her last breadths of the hour, When she felt lighter than before, Released from the burdens of her karma. And suddenly all blacked out, In a split second she was gone, and Peace is all she felt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/17/2013 10:38:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Ankita , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/18/2013 5:20:00 AM
Hey SKAT thanks a lot for your feedback :)
Date: 12/15/2013 3:39:00 AM
Ankita , anyone can hear the cries in your poem .That night , I think God must have taken a nap n see what had happened. May God bless her soul.
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Date: 12/10/2013 12:14:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Ankita ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 7:49:00 AM
wow, a deep diary. Karma, not a good friend. Ankita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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