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An Old Flame

I first tried to kill my old flame with my tears. It seems she knew the depth of my fears. She grab me and pulled me toward the fire. I knew inside she still my heart desire. I tried to escape and I fell at her feet. Lying there in agony and defeat. Die old flame is what I screamed to the fire. My old flame would not die in the fire. One part of me wants her to die in the flame. Can I actually say she is the blame. Her memories still haunts me in my sleep. For my love for her runs deep. Why can't I forget the past? And be free of her at last. I tried to over come my fears I tried to drown her with my tears. Her love will always be in my heart to keep. Now I just sit by the fire and watch my old flame and weep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 12:38:00 PM
Fascinating. It rhymes beautifully. More Ballad needed. This style is yours. Continue. All the best.
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:58:00 PM
Sad words, painting well the image of the "old flame." Perhaps you need to turn away from the fire to truly forget the past. When you do turn away, you may find there is a truer love waiting for you. Well done!
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:24:00 PM
A heart wrenching write...So much pain and longing for what once was and no longer is...I hope you find the strength to move on and let it go...Everything happens for a reason, you never know if maybe down the line if you are meant to be, you'll be and if not, then God has somebody for you..Best wishes to you and Welcome to the soup.. GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:50:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup. Enjoy
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:09:00 PM
We played that game as children first with mothers who rebuke us, and we failed quite often then, but we the strategy still speak to our humanity and this poem contributes to wider argument about how relationships are sustained. Peacer and love in your inspired write.
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:39:00 PM
A sad but passionate write from the soul of the writer. Vivid imagery. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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