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I offer you a glance And our eyes instantly lock. An unexpected shiver runs through me And time stands still on the clock. I offer you my hand And you take it warmly into yours. No words have to be spoken Yet we have opened so many doors. I offer you a dance And our bodies meld together. We are both in awe and astonished, Both wanting this to last forever. I offer you a kiss Which makes us quiver in delight. The passion and the pleasure Intensifies through the night. I offer you my heart and I trust that you won't break. To fall in glorious love is a risk we yearn to take. 3/6/2009 ~Posting my first poem had me feeling both nervous and excited, would other poets like my poem, and I was happy knowing others were reading my words, getting warm comments was the best feeling ever~

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Date: 7/26/2015 3:17:00 PM
Just love to see soup's poets first postings here, and wow, this is so magical Cecillia, your offering of poetry is a blessing to all that reads it,, it is so good...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 7/29/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thanks so much for such a thoughtful and sweet comment Harry. Hugs
Date: 3/8/2015 12:40:00 PM
Cecilia, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thanks PD. Hugs
Date: 3/5/2015 10:15:00 PM
Ceciia, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Skat. Hugs
Date: 3/4/2015 2:59:00 PM
a beautiful tender love poem - great to read your first posting:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs
Date: 4/22/2013 6:59:00 PM
Very nicely done Cecilia ;} yes they will get theirs one day "Beauty Queen" ;} you have an awesome day ;}
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Date: 11/28/2012 8:56:00 AM
Well worth the risk, this is lovely Cecilia.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard for my place in your contest.
Date: 10/1/2012 8:23:00 PM
I really like this one. It kinda inspired me to write something now, merci beacoup!
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Date: 3/17/2012 9:51:00 AM
Genuinely enjoy yhe way this piece seems to just unfold itself. Very touching. Congratulations on being featured this week - Chuck
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Date: 3/15/2012 3:39:00 PM
One of the best love poems I've read in a while, congrats on being featured as its extremelly well done. Gordon
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured.. Patrick
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:01:00 AM
the perfect love poem, i was wooed by5 the romance through out the poem.
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cecilia. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 10:46:00 PM
This is really nice, Cecilia. It would work really well in that new contest on romance. Only catch is that you have to write in a form that goes by the first initial of your name.For you, a C or A. I really enjoyed this!
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Date: 12/13/2009 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem Cecilia, your poetry is very very good, i do hope you write more >> kindest regards >> James
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Date: 3/10/2009 9:31:00 AM
Cecilia, indeed, you have much to "offer" the reader (as well as your lover) in this great poem filled with loving images! Nice work! Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:38:00 AM
quiver in delight... ahh!! really lovely!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:23:00 AM
Harliquin Romance Quality! Nice Poem.
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