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An Invite

An Invite Now son, I think you’re sneaky, not just lying for my good. Your cover-up was cheeky, I’m not blind or wear a hood. A nursing home’s not for me nor assisted-living room, I’m keeping my own money and that place is not my doom. I’m old but like strip poker, karaoke makes me high, known as practical joker, kind of partial to the rye. I raised a suited dandy that’s so rigid in his ways. Yeah, schooling came in handy cause you left for longer stays. So son, you have your answer, I’m not going anywhere. I’ve hired a belly dancer for my party if you dare. It might be my last birthday, if you come, you must have fun. Your sister’s having her way bringing beer and loaded gun. The gun is for my present, it’s protection I don’t need. So come and let’s be pleasant and we see where it will lead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/24/2012 6:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Janet. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/27/2012 6:17:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by. Janet
Date: 1/3/2012 7:07:00 AM
Oh I do love this Janet. It's so like me. The world's oldest kid. Told some friends of mine I intend to go full tilt till one day I just run out of gas and drop. Thill then I'll have fun my way. Great stuff. God Bless and a Happy New Year, JB :)
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/4/2012 11:00:00 AM
Thank you. Isn't this the only way to go out? Glad you enjoyed. Take care. Janet
Date: 1/2/2012 9:13:00 PM
oh, Janet. this is fun! so from what I read below, this was your mom you were writing in the character as? Good for her!
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/4/2012 10:54:00 AM
I wrote this before my Mom decended in Alzheimer's. She is in a memory care unit now. She kept running away and fighting everyone, so the only option I had left was behind doors she can't get out. Most days, she doesn't know us. Glad you enjoyed. Take care. Janet
Date: 1/2/2012 8:56:00 AM
Stick to your guns, Janet! Lol Enjoyed your poem. Love Kim
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/2/2012 9:14:00 AM
Thank you. I was just having some fun when I wrote this. My mom always said she didn't want to go to a nursing home and my brother really wanted her to go... Take care. Janet

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