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An Invitation To Night Terrors

Lay your head beside mine if you dare and enter the world of my nightmare. A long hall before you is lined by many doors, and opening each one exposes terrifying horrors. Unlock the first and see the cemetery where so many ancestors have been buried. Unkempt graves covered by thorny vines propel you back to tragedy-filled times. A second door reveals a room filled with flames where lost souls scream for second chances in vain. Behind the third door my late husband lies as I emit such mournful cries. I rush to the fourth door and watch the rerun of a fiancé who drowned while together we had swum. A fifth door swings open and I see a lonely woman, aged and forgotten by those who once loved her. There is something so familiar about this forlorn soul; a glimpse of my own future I behold. Have you the courage to take this journey with me into the terrors that come in nightly dreams? And if you are willing to behold such sights, should I see you as a demon or an angel of light? If you choose to lie at my side, perhaps these dreams will subside. But there are few who are up to this task. Are you one of the few I must ask. Night terrors seem so real as they occur, but by morning they may just be a blur. Perhaps it is my fate to remain, as now, alone, because few lovers will venture into the unknown -- a misty place where fears and tears collide. What partner would be willing to share such a frightening ride? A journey through this realm of horrors requires a spiritual guide. Those who promise to take us “for better or worse” are never truly prepared to endure such a curse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/7/2011 9:13:00 AM
Those nightmares are terrible and they are so real in our dreams! Dear Carolyn, you shoud write a book!!! I could sell some volumes of my book now. Got quite some good reviews. Thank you for all your kind commenst and wishes!...Love, Gert
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:06:00 PM
Carolyn mine dear poet...I recall you sharing with me these nightmares ! Lord only knows why you have them, definately I truly do not know..yet, if it were I, I'd need a soft warm body next to mine each night ! A touching write, had my blood presure way up there reading it ! much love, james
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:11:00 PM
Get ahold of Vincent Price. I can just see the agony on loveable Vincent's face. This is scaaaaary! As for myself, I am a coward when it comes to night terrors. This is the reason I set my alarm clock at ten-minute intervals. Should a night terror begin, I change the clock to five-minute intervals. This write is a gas. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:14:00 PM
Look how many comments LNC..Icant add much to that except you are exceptional. BG
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Date: 1/3/2011 1:04:00 PM
I hope that night terrors are not real part of your life only a topic on which you have written..Keep the creative pen flowing with new and amazing ideas..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 1:00:00 PM
Is it the flu' that has made you write this. Wonderful narrative you have worded for the inner thoughts. In my life I have never acknowledged this ghosts, witchs and what not. I think this is fictional write. carolyn. Soup Mail!!!!
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:56:00 PM
I know how much these dreams disturb you. You took me on a frightful journey into your subconscious thoughts. Good luck in the contest. My best to you, Diane
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:35:00 PM
Hi Carolyn. If you suffer those terrors my heart weeps for you. easy for some to say, 'learn to live with them'. Fantastic scary journey.You made this so real. Thanks for your comment. I came from a fishing village but was sent out to work on farms until I was strong enough to fish. Sleep softly good lady. Eamon
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:49:00 AM
Carolyn, I first want to thank you for choosing my entry in your contest to be among the winners. You have helped me gain attention on this website to a huge degree. As for your work here, I'm sure if Rod Serling were alive today, he would hire you to write scripts for both "The Twilight Zone" and "Night Gallery". This is very descriptively imaginative.
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:48:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, This is very sad and I know it's scary. I know that this is easier said than done, but try not to be afraid. Remember always that "Greater is He that is in you than he that is in the world" Soup Mail! Much love, Audrey
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:19:00 AM
well well Carolyn you certainly have a repitoire of senarios here, though the very fact of life itself, is leaving us open to unexpected attacks! daytime as well as night time, i do hope these scenes happen only scarcely.or not any more.
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:02:00 AM
Carolyn,....please check your soup mail from me.....Syd
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:57:00 AM
Vividly done and so real Carolyn, a beautiful yet scary write.. I also know people fight these kind of demons every day.. You gave us a glimpse of their reality.. Love Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:41:00 AM
frantic, eerie display of the nightmares of life, carolyn! whew, i hope this fiction as i think of you like a maiden fair, not a black spider widow..:) nevertheless the spooky, strong undercurrent of horror in your presence is a creative tool that that shakes me! into the winner's circle it is! :) nette
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:34:00 AM
Carolyn, you have captured the form perfectly... You are an excellent Poet.. Like Sydney says you are truly gifted...with love Michael
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:49:00 AM
sorry, i meant the date and time of the explosion. over here is broad day and mid night terror.
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:46:00 AM
Scaring but deep. the blood Christmas was real. i wrote the date of the poem on the poem.
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:33:00 AM
Strong stuff! A gripping trip into your dark side Carolyn...I hope the details are not all based in reality, but if so, then I am very sympathetic......clever use of rhyme internally arranged to conform to the prose requirement....I am sure you could easily win this contest, and rightly so if you do....well done, you are a gifted poet.....Syd
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:01:00 AM
well writen you are useing what God gave you to create. continue to use it don't worry about contest. comments are whats important. you may never know who you maybe helping in that similar situation like yours. john henry loving iii
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Date: 1/3/2011 8:56:00 AM
i don't have night terrors. i know my God will see me through everything. i don't have a room filled with flames. with out a soubt it was taken from me. and i lost someone but discovered just today that they are still here. just in a differeent way. look and see. john
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