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An Empty Bottle

captured behind glass her scent, forever, lingers.... Chanel No. 5 _ _ _ For PD's Contest: 7/25/14

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 9:50:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win!!!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 8:58:00 PM

Loved it too, clever and real. Congratulations

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/20/2014 8:16:00 PM

I liked this the first time I read it and here it is--right on top. Congratulations, Carrie.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/20/2014 7:48:00 PM

Love it, on so many levels, great write, and great win. Well done.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 5:19:00 PM

Love it...it came out smelling beautiful..hugs Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 4:31:00 PM

Grats on your win, awesome girl :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:02:00 PM

I knew this should win big. Congrats to you, Carrie.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/20/2014 12:12:00 PM

Ahh the sweet smell of success. Congrats on your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/20/2014 10:21:00 AM

BIG congratulations on an excellent TOP of the class win! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2014 10:06:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats i loved this clever take on the theme:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/20/2014 9:53:00 AM

Funny and witty yet interesting, Carrie. congrats on the great win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:24:00 AM

Ha, Ha Carrie, I love this one, and that's one of my favorite perfumes. Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 7/30/2014 10:53:00 AM

A scent for a lingering memory of a dear one....lovely take on this theme, Carrie! This will linger in my mind, too! / paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/20/2014 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie....this was a winner right from the start!!

David Mohn

Date: 7/27/2014 6:16:00 PM

Very clever and original...well written Carrie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/26/2014 4:33:00 AM

Brilliant write Carrie! Very lovely! Gl to you!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/25/2014 10:08:00 PM

A great take and superb offering... So sweet.... My first wife loved that..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 9:39:00 PM

I LOVE that scent. I remember using it sometimes in school years. Kind of miss it. Great idea.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/25/2014 5:58:00 PM

JOhn has a great idea...Ill bet they would love it. Its a beauty. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2014 4:27:00 PM

wow - wonderful take on the theme hope this nails it for you its awesome! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2014 4:14:00 PM

How lovely to think of your mother whenever you enjoy the scent of Chanel No. 5. This is a wonderful entry for the contest Carrie. Blessings

John Lawless

Date: 7/25/2014 4:13:00 PM

Carrie, you should send this to the Chanel company to use in their ad campaign. Very nice take on the theme.