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An Early Lesson

I was very young and so small in size, I sat by the mud, constructing some pies. My mama came out of the kitchen door. It was time for afternoon lunch at four. She called my name, for she needed me then To help carry lunch to our hungry men. I had dried my pies in the summer sun. I selected two that were nice and done. Something made me do it, I don’t know why, I called out to them, “We are bringing pie." Happy faces fell at the pie we brought. I knew I’d done something I hadn’t ought. Their baby sister changed a bit that day The first time she felt empathy that way. For Thvia"s "The Devil Made me Do It." contest This is a true story I couldn't get into fourteen lines what a deep impact that it had on my life. No one ever said anything to me to make me feel bad about what I had done and I am sure it was forgotten years ago by everyone but me. When I saw the down cast look on the faces of my young, beloved brothers, I felt so deeply rueful that I have not forgotten in oh these so many years. The Devil may have made me do it, but God was there to turn it into a lesson.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/9/2010 7:31:00 PM
gosh, your story makes me recall something I did now when I too was very young. I should have written about that too!!! But instead I just did not enter this contest at all. well, congratulations. GREAT idea! luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/9/2010 2:37:00 PM
Kool little story Joyce, loved it. Many congratulations on your win in Thvia's contest >> James :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:14:00 AM
You dirty mud pie, You! Smile, Congratulations Joyce on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:41:00 AM
This was a sweet childhood memory....one that I too would never forget....it shows that you have a big heart, Joyce! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:00:00 AM
More congrats Joyce on another brilliant win for another magnificent entry luv.. enjoy much success for a great poetess ..luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 6:32:00 PM
I so loved the innocence here... thank you for this entry!
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:47:00 PM
Hi Joyce, I only just now look through your list of poems and saw "Anticipation", my eyes popped out of my head! I made a virtual run to that page, just to see what it was about. You see, I did a poem not too long ago with the same name and I just wanted to see what yours was about. I wasn't disappointed at all. That was a great and detailed write. Fantastic!! You should read mine too and give your review. Best of love. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/7/2010 3:25:00 PM
Very touchy and gripping story of your childhood well expressed, Joyce
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Date: 10/7/2010 2:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your story of a segment of your life...I am glad that you shared this and I am glad that I read it...Sara
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