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An Autumn Day With You My Love

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The day when we walked an autumn park, hand in hand, what joy the feel of your breath ignited in me - the gold in the colored leaves. the aura surrounding you. the red that floated to the ground like the fire that flowed from your fingers through to my veins. The trees multifaceted in hundreds of shades were the perfect backdrop. The autumn day could hear my heart, it was beating so loud. I wanted to hide with you, with just the touch of your hand, with just our eyes locked on one another, and freeze the euphoria I felt when we walked one day an autumn park hand in hand.

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Bianca And Gerhard

Date: 9/14/2014 3:22:00 PM

awesome in deep feelings from soul to soul.. also our favorite poet you are Maurice !

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/14/2014 3:34:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2014 11:54:00 AM

Nice romantic write on an autumn day, Maurice

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:45:00 PM

thank you Dr.Ram.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/13/2014 1:50:00 AM

Excellent. wonderful imagery write. Very beautiful photo to match it. Enjoyed. Tfs

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:46:00 PM

That is very kind of you. thank you

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/13/2014 1:21:00 AM

A beautiful recalling of one moment in time.... Your descriptiveness of the scene really makes the reader feel like they are standing right there with you.... A lovely write and a photo to match! Nicely done, Maurice!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:47:00 PM

kelly how kind of you thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2014 10:41:00 PM

soupmail.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:47:00 PM

I prefer turtle soup and make it snappy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2014 9:19:00 PM

WOW, Maurice!! You are giving us a run for our money with your entry!! Luscious imagery. Romance makes everything even better! Soupmail.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:49:00 PM

thank you. for some reason i like this poem better since you first read it.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2014 7:36:00 PM

wonderful imagery Maurice:-) I adore the vibrant colours of the picture you posted it really compliments the write:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/12/2014 8:08:00 PM

Yeah my friend got me a sweater. I would of preferred a moaner.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2014 7:48:00 PM

oh thats even better I adore autumnal colours brought 2 jumpers and 2 blouses when i was away in autumn colours - I hate shopping for clothes so must have been a good day:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/12/2014 7:41:00 PM

thank you. changed the picture. today is my first day as a premium member. i have wasted the day learning how to use all the toys. i am so far behind answering comments and visiting peoples poems.