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An Angel Weeps

Look all around you what do you see? a world that was beautiful Look closer, draw near look from above see the gnashes There are great bare patches de-void of their trees just dust bowls The angel watches and her tears fall like rain As each lands it heals the land new growth appears Soon a host of angels each one weeping their tears restoring all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/11/2013 4:52:00 PM
Beautiful! so lovely
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Date: 7/11/2013 5:01:00 PM
ty Betty for stopping by and enjoying this Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/24/2013 5:42:00 PM
very nicely penned Shadow....best wishes
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:12:00 PM
Ty Joseph have a good week Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/24/2013 4:39:00 PM
"We've got to get back to the garden" as Joni Mitchell wrote. Touching poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:55:00 PM
hi Matthew glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
Very optimistic an wonderfully written poem! We have to pray for more angels to save our beloved mother earth!
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:11:00 PM
hi Demetrious yes we should. in the last 150 - 200 years we have done more damage than ever before ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/24/2013 6:45:00 AM
Just love your selection of words.The unique way via which you deal with defforestation is beautiful. Keep writing Shiraz
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:19:00 AM
Hi Shiraz and Ty glad you like my work Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/23/2013 10:08:00 PM
I really like this one. Keep the pen handy
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:18:00 AM
Hi PJ ty so much for your high praise much appreciated Shadow x smiles

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