Amid You
her “c u there”.
it felt more like
“i) better c u there” -
and) I think well - to each her own;
each) stair climbs upward
because) of traumatic lovesickness
(against) his better judgment!
instead) of her patronage
(under) heavy assault!
inside) his fort-knox
(with) her electromagnetic call…
possibly) peter in the frying pan
(not) well to be content -
with) contemptuous tinkerings
(amid) his flaming guts.
Copyright © Andrew Gallagher | Year Posted 2010
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