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American Acrostic

American Acrostic Anarchist freedom, freedom of choice Money making elite, elite military force Environmentally unconscious, unconscious awake Republican, Democratic, Democratic State Independent population, population confused Corrupt financial system, system abused Arrogant mentality, mentality controlled National prejudice, prejudice still sold bmdavey@ 04/02/16

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/8/2016 10:15:00 PM

The Red, White and Blue, isn't the same as she once was. Well stated political views in your own unique voice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2016 1:26:00 PM

sad but true, Brian, and the thing Connie says about your repeating of words, I really liked that.

Brian Davey
Date: 4/4/2016 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Andrea I really appreciate all of your input

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2016 12:49:00 AM

So cleverly written Brian. I really admire the way you have your repeating words which are so meaningful. This is brilliant! #7 ; )

Brian Davey
Date: 4/4/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Connie it was totally new for me to do it this way and it seems to have worked

Jan Allison

Date: 4/2/2016 7:10:00 PM

I do like the clever use of the repeated words Brian - great idea:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Davey
Date: 4/4/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you I wrote the first line that way not even meaning to do so and then the idea formed to do them all that way