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Amber Rain

My Love pours down with amber rain To fill your heart that I may gain Burgundy hues in lavender skies My Love keeps pouring as it slowly dies The rain subsides with a rampageous red With salivating sorrows that surly spread Melancholic meadows murkily mist As tears tear the heart of Love that’s missed Weary words withering ways Love is trapped in a hellion haze The rain comes again to soothe the mind As we follow the road that is undefined Your love deluded to a savourless stain As I keep searching in the Amber rain. June.25.2016 ^WW^

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Date: 7/10/2016 1:34:00 AM
The was beautiful!
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Michelle...welcome to the soup...god bless...WW
Date: 6/26/2016 10:17:00 AM
very descriptive and metaphoric. I enjoyed seeing this.
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Date: 6/28/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/25/2016 12:42:00 PM
Wonderful write!
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Date: 6/26/2016 7:46:00 AM
Thank you James...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/25/2016 8:30:00 AM
The colors used in this poem bring such vivid images to me. really wonderful poem Winged Man.
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Date: 6/25/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Daniel...I'm sure we all experienced some Amber Rain...god bless...^WW^

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