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Am Still In Love With You

AM STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU It wasn’t easy to fall in love with you, though your looks were always new. You won my heart with time but oh! then I had no money, no dine. with nothing to offer you but my heart and soul, you decided to go away in search for gold leaving me in melancholy and jeopardy. I cried for my loss; I mourned for my tragedy. you overlooked my errors when I had affluence but now you underlook me in every sense you yearned for my love before now you snoop me unlike before, you disgraced me amidst my friends and you broke our engagement, caring less; You called me “sweetheart” before while now you call me merely “Michael” everything you do to make me hate you doesn’t hurt me and I curse myself for it because am still in love with you. My father disowned me because of your sake and I nearly drowned in a lake you showed no care when i broke a leg and you left me while sick in bed you called my mum a whore and in my absence you stole from my meagrer store I can’t put your deeds in words for it is long; for after all that you did to me am really confused and i curse myself for it for…for… for.. am still in love with you

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Date: 5/6/2014 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Temajung
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Temajung Michael Tanjang
Date: 5/6/2014 12:08:00 PM
thanks isr
Date: 5/4/2014 10:09:00 PM
Hi Temajung, Powerful and honest write WOW. It blew me away. Thank you for this amazing write. Peace, Deborah
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Temajung Michael Tanjang
Date: 5/6/2014 12:11:00 PM
thanks
Date: 4/22/2014 1:11:00 PM
Temajung, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/18/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Temajung :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:33:00 AM
Hi Temajung, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/17/2014 2:57:00 PM
Oh it shows you cant control your emotions, you can't help but feel how you feel. Hope you can feel love without it hurting you.
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Temajung Michael Tanjang
Date: 4/18/2014 3:48:00 PM
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT MADAM CASARAH

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