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I love you for the little things you do, like how your smile makes everything alright. And how you worry when I'm out of sight, I've never known a kinder soul than you. Sharing a life with someone so giving, I pledge my soul, my blood, my heart, my breath. And my love shall follow you unto Death; loving you is what makes life worth living. You are all I'm not or ever could be, and yet, you make me feel that I'm the best. Having chosen me above all the rest, your soul embraces, shields, and protects me. I will love you always and forever, you're my soulmate, and I'm a part of you. And there is nothing anyone can do, for we share a bond that Death can't sever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2016 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome entry! I really liked this.
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Date: 2/27/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2016 1:29:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/26/2016 7:51:00 AM
Hi Emile: Beautiful response. well deserved win! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/26/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2016 2:06:00 AM
Words of a love not taken for granted...very lovely, Emile! Congrats to you....hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/24/2016 11:57:00 AM
Very nice Emile, your poem follows the theme well and responds admirably to the original while keeping a similar flow.
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Date: 2/24/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks James, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 8:33:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love Linda
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/22/2016 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb sonnet Emile.
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/22/2016 2:51:00 PM
A lovely sonnet response, Emile. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/22/2016 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning sonnet, Emile. a well deserving winner. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
You are fortunate to have an enduring love.
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Richard, your comments are appreciated and most welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 8:21:00 AM
A delightful SONNET Emile! Perfect flow and neat rhyming. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Keith, your comments are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 7:39:00 AM
What a passionate declaration of deathless love, dear Emile! To find the right person is a blessing to find a better person that us is really a gift of God! Enjoyed your poem very much for it is so honest and full of devotion! Good luck!
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Demetrios, your friendly comments are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 6:13:00 AM
Enjoyed the language, and the voice that you have given this piece. Sets the tone wonderfully. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Scott, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 1:09:00 AM
Loved how you refrain from overtly flowery language in this piece, and spoke in an almost conversational tone. The sincerity was real, and your words got to me ... "and how you worry when I'm out of sight" << it's the little things that can be the best things, at times. Great sonnet!
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, your comments are always friendly and are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:14:00 PM
Oh, a new contest. Haven't seen this one yet. A great entry Emile. ; )
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Connie, your comments are most welcome. Emile.

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