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One's head 
In the hands 
Sailing an ocean 
Of dreams 
I begin drawing 
The perfect picture 

Searching the horizon 
Waves of emotions 
Flow out 
to someone 
Playing a song 
An unsung melody 

Plays a tune 
From the 
deepest organ 
If I could 
buy you 
one world 
In giving 
to you 
My everything 

Romeo must bleed 
Flowing down 
Humbled ink 
From the deepest well 
on paper 
Poor but rich 
With love 

One soul 
See's far beyond 
All materials 
the next chapter 
It was never 
meant to be 

Feeling pain within 
Love painless 
Without hurt 
to the dark side 
Breaking heart 

Something of beauty 
Romeo he bleeds 
Juliet never saw 
His blood 
In the heart 
One of a flower 
Feelings for love 
Motions beautiful 

Always is forever 
Happier ever after 
of love 
Housed in dreams 
Two hearts 
one treasure 

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Waves of emotion making a big huge tide to fade in soft ripples on seashores..A deep verse of longing.The heart is the best place to be rich indeed.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Liam, this is lovely...the longing real and felt in every line...beautiful romantic write....

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:45:00 AM
    A very interesting piece, you may want to consider lengthening some of the lines so that your thoughts are communicated more clearly. Either way I enjoyed your poem.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/25/2013 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ever so much richard i will have a look deeply appreciated