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Alto the Tenor Meets Barratone

Fancy the fashion of an orchestra moving in a rhythmic flattering perception I gather the timpani's of a tantalizing taste and I rather persuade a mix of brass thy trumphant , Piccolo , a tuba or two and my favorite thy french horn the bass arrives in a hum-drum beat hanging near the floor quite a catastrophic interlude a pluck and a pull and thy pushing violin's enter with grace a few keys of the ivory and ever so wishful we have a dream A fancy free eruption begins oh the sophisticated choas !!!

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Date: 5/11/2010 3:30:00 AM
A poet after mine own heart ! I think you may enjoy a write of mine, "Trombone, Fiddle and Flute" its titled, if you care to read it, you'll find it close to the begining of my joining the soup. I wrote it here May of 2009. Thank you again for sparking up the morning ! I'll just have to go dabble a bit more into your writes Sir ! james
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:27:00 PM
Sounds like a great band of instruments flowing together Rick...does it play any Italian tunes too? great description in your words and lines... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:22:00 PM
Pulse-pounding rhythm fills this creative poem, Rick. Indeed, you introduce many members of the orchestra to each other. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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