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A WOODLAND PATH IN THE DAPPLED SUN HUSHED AND QUIET.. where do lead? shall I follow you or stop and return; there is no choice, the past is gone, the flowers dead where go you lead! your beauty brings delight, each step is life in vibrant hue; there is no choice but,to follow you I know not where these footsteps lead 'neath leaf,in petalled flower seed brian strand a woodland path contest june 6

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Date: 6/13/2011 9:50:00 PM
This is a very interesting one you wrote. I like the lyrical quality of it. Congrats on your win,Brian.
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 5:49:00 AM
A beautiful insight in your lines here and I love how you ended with that last sentence "I know not..'neath leaf, in petaled flower seed" Congrats Brian on your fantastic win..gautami
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:03:00 AM
Many congrats on your wins, Brian : )
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:50:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Brian
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:15:00 AM
congratualtions Brian on your win in my contest with this modified sonnet, I love the idea of it, I must give it a whirl~~
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your lovely win in Constance's contest with this equally lovely creation.. enjoy my friend.. for excellence in poetry ..
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:23:00 AM
congrats on your win with this exceptional write cory
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:12:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Brian and a great example of a free sonnet for me. Elaine
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