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Along the Shores of Distant Dreams

Along the shores of distant dreams beyond horizon’s stare, of stardust eyes and ventured seas in timeless journeys fair I call out in a desperate tone afloat this ocean view, on waves eternal cast alone in thoughts of only you For if these waters claim their prize in white capped angered form, to fall in fear, dark clouded skies in passion's mighty storm And when the deep shall take my breath below its surfaced chill, I’ll hold your love with me in death and I forever will

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Date: 11/7/2016 6:59:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem...Lovely write indeed... A big 7...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 7:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind words Supraja.
Date: 11/6/2016 8:51:00 AM
I love this poem of longing:) I'm in awe of your talent, Chris:)an unquestionable 7:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much Jo. Your kind words this weekend on my poetry have lifted my spirits and brought a huge smile to my face.
Date: 11/5/2016 4:05:00 PM
The deepest ocean shall never take your breath.You'll rise and fall to rise again over the tide..the pain ..as man... Her love you'd hold ..and that desperate tone will change into a warrior's song..Oh this poem of yours is so inspiring...As you can see..A favourite .
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 6:20:00 AM
Your comments Charmaine on my poetry are poetry to me. Your words are always so uplifting and encouraging. I appreciate your visits more than you know. Thank you so much.
Date: 11/5/2016 3:42:00 PM
A beautiful poem of longing Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 11/5/2016 11:42:00 AM
I'm with everyone else. A Fav.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Maurice for your kindness.
Date: 11/5/2016 11:00:00 AM
Wow, another favorite of mine. Beautiful, sweet comfort!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I always look forward to your visits and your nice comments.

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